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Comments from GhostCharger
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-04-06 12:14:50 | Lost Empire 18 | I love all your stories, but this is my favorite. Awesome work as usual Pars. :) -Ghost |
| 2016-04-06 13:31:21 | Leben | Hmm very interesting and different again from the rest. I wouldnt mind reading more of this Pars :) I like the difference, but not sure of the jumping between PoV's. I would normally say to add names of which person it changes to but your storyline is sometimes too short between. Perhaps adding a double enter placing when you change between people to signify this is someone different. Just trying to come up with an easy way for us to break it up a lil. Otherwise awesome :) -Ghost |
| 2016-04-12 11:18:04 | Island Fever 5: Family - Chapter 04_(0) | This just leaves me completely speachless. Your ability to put to paper is just sublime magic :) -Ghost |
| 2016-04-12 11:48:03 | Lost Empire 19_(0) | God i love this, cant get enough of it. Awesome as always Pars :) -Ghost |
| 2016-04-12 12:10:45 | A guy and his...? 24 Full Circle | Awesome! -Ghost |