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Comments from Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-06-19 18:45:32 | Sleeping Daughter 1: Wicked Wife's Plan | Love the story, amazingly sexy and beautifully written. I love daughter stuff, especially when the mom gets involved. I have a bit of constructive criticism. There were some typos and you switched between first and third person a few times. Also, just a bit of personal preference, "cunny" is just such an unattractive word, as well as the phrase "breed my/our daughter", it just sounds weird. |
| 2016-06-19 19:16:29 | Sleeping Daughter 2: Backdoor Delight | Really great, as hot and sexy as the first and very well written. But bowels? Taint? While those words are accurate, they are really bad choices for erotic writing. Also it seems weird for an 18 year old girl to still call her mom "mommy". |
| 2016-12-19 21:29:01 | Celestial Nirvana: Part 5 | I post twice a week, they usually appear every monday and friday. |
| 2017-01-02 18:24:04 | Celestial Nirvana: Part 8 - FINAL CHAPTER | I can't, one of the characters is underage, and changing it would disrupt the story. Trust me, I really wish I could. |
| 2016-08-02 11:05:05 | I Dream of Angels: The Series | Just send a message to my account. |