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Comments from Raudhbjorn
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-12 10:41:12 | Back to Salome_(0) | Fantastic. This is among some of the best written stuff I've read on this site. Or anywhere else on the net. Please keep collaborating, the distinction between the voices lends realism and depth that's lacking in most people's writing. Truly top notch. Thank you for this. |
| 2019-09-11 01:13:19 | Newfound Lake | Truly outstanding work. Sex or no sex, this is a story worth reading. Thank you for writing this and please, keep turning out more of the same. |
| 2019-11-25 00:49:48 | The Lost Tribe, Part 3 | As much as I have enjoyed this series, I gotta say, that it feels like you phoned this chapter in. One half-assed sex scene, one masturbation scene that's about as sexy as watching Rodney Dangerfield do a strip tease and no significant development of either plot or characters. And seriously, whats with the whole "teen boys become militant savages that fear women after just a year"? The nun I can understand, but the average teen male will do and put up with, just about anything to get laid. Unless provided with pretty much constant reinforcement, or major psychological trauma, they don't become half-witted, psychopathic rejects from Dr. Strangelove. Please revisit your other works and apply you considerable talent to rewriting this chapter. I really like this story concept and enjoy your writing |
| 2019-12-13 05:36:42 | First Time For Randi | If they were both in 2nd grade together, how is he in highschool, but she's still in middle school? |
| 2019-12-13 06:17:03 | Star Whores XXX The Jawa Girl | This needs a sequel please. Or better yet a trillogy. |