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Comments from Raudhbjorn
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-13 01:43:54 | The Bounty Hunter_(1) | Great concept and storyline, but the second-person POV is off-putting to me. |
| 2020-06-01 22:54:08 | Amanda Likes Japanese Girls, Final | Something with the softball team. Perhaps at an away game? Another encouter with Max would be nice too. Maybe a comung out story for Amanda? I'd also like one during summer break with Hina taking Amanda home to Japan for the break. Or one set much later with Hina and Amanda as an established couple and tapping Max or Little Brother to be the father of their baby. |
| 2020-06-24 01:54:38 | How to get rid of that sweet innocence - Having fun in CHOP | Fucking brilliant! Thanks for writing this. |
| 2020-06-24 02:19:27 | Sweet revenge and maybe a bit more (S1) | Very nice. You need an editor and to run the text through a spllchecker, but the premise is excellent, the dialogue is pretty well written and not stilted, and the characters are believable. All in all, a great effort. I'm glad to see you've continued the series. |
| 2020-06-24 02:38:06 | Change of heart – Steve’s first Date (S2) | Please continue this story. |