| 2017-01-16 02:35:47 |
Giving into Darkness (part 5)
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YES...you can't leave us hanging!!! That is one of my pet peeves about some authors. They get you to a good part and then there is no more to the story. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter. |
| 2017-01-16 01:44:29 |
Giving into Darkness (Pt 4)
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I give this a positive rating but it says I've voted too many times today. :-( |
| 2017-01-15 22:28:34 |
Government Torture
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"Together they worked all 16 inches of him inside her" SERIOUSLY??? Sounds like it was written by a 14 year old!! |
| 2017-01-15 23:48:27 |
Giving into Darkness.
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I don't usually get into the monster/vampire stories but I have to admit, I really liked this one. Hope there will be more chapters. |
| 2017-01-15 20:42:46 |
Taking Her Chapter 5
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Not sure if I am going to finish reading this story or not. Between the punctuation errors (It feels like you have cummed. For hours before your orgasom has finished.), the spelling errors (cummed, orgasom, squizing) to name a few and the detail errors (without warning sticks her thumb in your ass- <there is already something in her ass with the horse tail attached to it>), it gets very confusing. |