| 2017-02-24 11:05:30 |
Alyssa 2... and Morgan
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I enjoy your stories and the way you write them. One way for me to know it's a good story is that I get invested. This time I was worried that Alyssa would look at the pics on his phone and find the ones of Morgan. Lots of tension. Then I began to wonder if Alyssa had fucked someone else and that's what led to her doing things differently. Then when they talked about her flirting with other guys, I wondered if she had been fucking other guys all along. I'm eager for the next installment. Good story. |
| 2017-02-24 11:52:29 |
GF’s Dorm 1
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Please learn the difference between being introverted and being shy and soft-spoken. |
| 2017-08-05 10:16:24 |
Story 1: My First Date With Brandi
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Poor spelling, grammar, punctuation, and syntax make this unreadable for me. |
| 2017-10-07 10:54:38 |
Potential Part 21
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You are one of the few people I know of who understands the difference between envy and jealousy. I was pleased to read that. |
| 2017-10-07 13:15:36 |
Potential Part 21
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I love this story, but I don't believe it's a true story as it's labeled. I get so involved with the characters. |