| 2017-10-07 13:37:50 |
My first Time_(91)
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I wish it had been longer and more detailed. I'm confused about point of view. Your account is Jenny, and the teller of the story is Steve. Who are you? And is this really a true story as it's labeled? |
| 2018-02-07 08:00:02 |
Blackmailing Jane_(0)
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What happened with Jane? Did you have sex with her again? |
| 2018-02-07 08:05:16 |
Blackmailing Jane_(0)
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He, not you. I was speaking to your friend whose story this is. |
| 2018-06-17 10:53:13 |
Fullfilling My Boyfriends Fantasy
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Content was OK, though unrealistic in a few ways. Mostly my negative rating was about style, absence of paragraph breaks, punctuation, and spelling. I prefer stories by people who are good writers. At least you could have someone rewrite the story who knows how to write. |
| 2018-06-22 08:45:22 |
Potential Part 25
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I wait for every chapter and am excited to see one when I do. You are one of my 3 favorite writers on this site - only 2 of whom are still active here. |