| 2010-04-01 15:50:03 |
Lisa II
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No matter what anyone says about your stories, they always have one thing in common: they are incredibly hot. Wow, just Wow!! |
| 2010-04-04 15:38:45 |
Camping With My Girls Ch 10-11
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And just to think, I almost missed this episode. Great story, please continue. |
| 2010-04-06 09:57:45 |
Ellen Teaches Young Tech Boy a Lesson
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I notice that you had finally posted this on the stories site and just had to stop by and vote and comment. Loved it on the forum and love it here. Thanks again for your kindness to ejls. |
| 2010-04-06 10:30:26 |
Summertime at Grandpa Dicks- Ch 3
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As always, very well written. The perfect mix of tenderness and down and dirty sex. |
| 2010-04-06 20:28:51 |
Just one girl.....
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Jaynee - as I told you when you posted this on the forum, the story is marvelous, but you really need to work on your format. Nice, neat, concise paragraphs with double spacing between them keeps the story from looking, as one of my friends puts it, "a wall of text". It really does make it easier to read and I know it would make me really anxious to read your next story. Whatever you do, don't stop writing as I think you have a nice talent. |