| 2009-10-02 18:17:48 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 3
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One of your best. Just sitting here waiting for the next episode. donb9033 |
| 2009-10-07 20:20:37 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 4
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Nice little bit of action and adventure to top off the sex of Chapter 3. Good read. |
| 2009-10-10 00:25:57 |
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How in the world can a woman write a story like this. I would only expect something like this from a very twisted man. With all of that said, I thought the story was very well written and executed, but disturbing as hell. I sort of foresaw the victum was to be his daughter, but did not expect how raw it would be. Especially in view of the writer. If you write a sequel, I will probably read it, but I personally do not encourage you to do so. Write something not quite so disturbing and I will be your eternal fan. Thanks for the mental exercise. Donb9033 |
| 2009-11-22 19:24:06 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 7
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Already commented when you posted this on the Forum, but I still like it. Very good read. Plot and sex - what'll you think of next? |
| 2009-11-23 16:12:18 |
Sam to Samantha_(1)
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Hot plot, sort of poor writing. Lots of grammatical and spelling errors. They detracted somewhat from the story, but, like I said, the story was hot. I hope you keep trying. |