| 2009-05-14 17:25:13 |
Who's Your Daddy? (A Daughter's Love)
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I think you can take any criticism you get. You seem to be pretty healthy and sure of yourself. It comes through in your writing. |
| 2009-07-04 13:53:43 |
Subtle Seduction
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I hope you are not going to quit writing. I would love to see more stories by you in this vein. Great story, well written, and the spelling was good. The only complaint I have (very minor) is the paragraphs being this long makes it a little difficult to read on the computer. I told you it was minor. Please keep writing. donb9033 |
| 2009-07-05 02:16:27 |
While Mom and Dad Were Gone
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Very sweet story. Yo9033u show lots of promise and talent. The story is pretty well written and you structure is good. The only thing I think you need to work on is content - flesh out the story. Good try and I am looking forward to a continuation. donb |
| 2009-09-24 00:29:37 |
Lisa @ 5 with Bob & Mommy.
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You sure make some enemies with these stories, don't you? I am awed by you ability to make a story about something I abhor something so damn hot. donb9033 |
| 2009-09-26 13:46:32 |
Dreams_(2)
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Very hot dream, Nikki, and your writing skills are improving. Still need some attention on spelling, though. Loved the story. donb9033 |