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Comments from troggy
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-11-07 22:35:25 | Susan's into Incest Part 1 | great story, but it has a lot of issues. 'they landsd in & soon' should be 'they landed & soon', full sttop missing after 'dad eventually found her'. also 'Susan was lay there the sun longer ', should be 'laying there on the sun lounger'. full stop missing after 'she was naked'. 'Susan agreed, back on board' should be 'Susan agreed. Back on board'. full stop missing after' throwing it across the cabin'. 'pushed down onto her back' should be 'pushed her down onto her back'. 'buried his pace' should be 'buried his face'. 'slide it' should be 'slid iit', 'such forces some ended up on hers tits' should be 'such force, some ended up on her tits'. a lot of commas missing through out. you need someone to proof read it. |
| 2021-02-16 22:53:48 | Across Eternity: Book 2 - Chapter 10 | a really brilliant story from, start to finish. can't wait to start reading the next one |
| 2021-01-18 02:20:34 | Across Eternity: Book 2 - Chapter 3 | this a great story. keep it coming |
| 2021-01-24 16:24:43 | The Sunspot | awesome. next part? btw n612ua, nothing happens on accident, it jhappens by accident |
| 2021-03-23 21:49:00 | The Medieval Marine Part Ten(1) | this a really good story, but..... u need someone to proofread before putting online as there have been a no. of errors with each part. this one was the worst so far: 'making a decision without abdicate evidence' should have been 'making a decision with adequate evidence'. keep this story going as it is a reay good read |