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Comments from troggy
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-02-01 16:30:07 | HOBO Chapters 1,2 and 3 | for someone to have thru what you have been thru & come out the other side is pretty awesome. the few hiccups in your writing are to be expected. the story so far is really great. i do like your stories. it is good to have you writing again |
| 2021-03-30 22:59:02 | The Medieval Marine Part Eleven | as i stated in my comment on you previous chapter, u are using the wrong word: 'his opponents had been annulated'. annulated means ring shaped. what should have been written was 'his opponents had been annihilated'. so please use the right words & make sure they are spelt correctly as it reduces the natural flow of the story when u have to stop & think about what was meant. still it is a great story |