| 2008-09-27 14:07:59 |
Jessica in Jail - Part Two
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WoW lolly ... I only wish I had read this story earlier. Fantastic Story, especially loved the DP. |
| 2008-09-27 14:08:40 |
Jessica in Jail - Part Two
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WoW lolly ... I only wish I had read this story earlier. Fantastic Story, especially loved the DP. |
| 2008-10-25 09:52:08 |
HOW I MADE MY SISTER-IN-LAW A WHORE
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This is a good begining. There are some gramatical errors but still readable. I'd like to see more advanced writing, the story line is great. |
| 2008-11-09 11:33:25 |
MY STORY_(9)
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wow! speechless! such simple words but so powerful a confession. Although I can relate to the words I cannot become one with your story. I likeed it. I'd like see more of your words. I hope you have grown stronger from that one experience. |
| 2008-11-09 11:36:01 |
MY STORY_(9)
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Doesn't look like my comment to you posted, I liked this poem. Simple words but what a powerful confession. |