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Comments from BlackRose
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-06-28 18:20:25 | Lisa raped and drowned | Without paragraphs this was a hard read. Sorry couldn't read the whole thing. |
| 2009-10-29 13:03:43 | tina rides david | I had some difficulties reading this, everything just ran together. But what I could manage to read was a good start and would have liked to read the whole thing. Also agree with everyone else, qoates and paragraphs would do wonders. |