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Comments from BlackRose
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2009-05-25 16:50:33 | Ana's on the Prowl | Good story Minty. Aside from some minor gramatical errors this was a good start. ~BR |
2009-05-26 18:40:34 | He Touches Me | this made me go aaawwww, she is in love ~BR |
2009-05-26 22:20:43 | Blind Date_(6) | This leaves much to think about ... |
2009-05-31 06:44:02 | Boy's Locker Room | I had trouble following the story due to the lack of paragraphs. But then again as you were writing from a very young perspective it fits. This seemed to have a good story line and a great introduction. ~BR |
2009-06-28 18:17:18 | Hey hun, this was a good story. ~BR |