| 2017-12-13 10:24:06 |
A TALE OF TWO ISLANDS_(1)
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Very well written, nicely done. Grammar could improve though. Some proof reading would be nice too. |
| 2017-12-15 17:35:25 |
Taboo American Style Pt.1 of 3
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I noticed that this story has been left incomplete since 2009. Its not nice, please complete it if you're still alive or not in jail |
| 2017-12-16 16:30:37 |
Panopticon
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This is a whole load of bullshit. I can't even call it a story. Have you read other stories on this site. What a waste of my time and data |
| 2017-12-17 08:21:05 |
Stepfather Sleepwalking Surprise
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Beautiful story, well written, nicely done. Please keep it up |
| 2017-12-29 05:35:21 |
Rachel's Shaved Pussy chapter 1
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Nicely done, keep up the good work |