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Comments from TwatSwat123
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-11-30 17:36:11 | Going Down Under--Chapter 1 | It's good, but the narrative moves from past to present tense a lot. Still a positive for me. |
| 2018-11-30 20:09:11 | To Hell and Back, Chapters 1-2 | I love how you create your characters. There always so unique and fleshed-out, and all so likeable. And the sex... omg. No one on this site writes more deive, intense sex scenes. It's the closest to cinematic writing I've seen on this site. Are you a professional writer? |
| 2019-07-04 17:33:22 | The Voices in my Head part 1_(0) | Loved this so much! |
| 2019-08-03 17:24:33 | Emma at the Beach | I hate to be a grammar bitch because your story is so good, but why do so many of your dialogue sentences end without a period????? Other than that really great story thanks so much for posting it. |
| 2019-08-06 23:29:13 | Tomboy | I thought this one was kind of simplistic compared to the other ones you have posted right now, but definitly wiorth a positive vote from me. |