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Comments from Nightowl12398
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2008-05-25 05:27:26 | My little latina - ch1 | For those of you that are turned on and/or like the sex to start immediately I have put a short story up for validation. It is named "Morning sex" and should be out in three or four days. Enjoy J.B. |
2008-05-26 02:48:45 | The Barfly - ch. 2, rewrite | Happy you liked my story... Funny that you mention Fantasy. I'm actually working on an angle where I hint at certain things and then leave it up to the readers imagination to fill into the gaps. I think this might be appropriate since different readers have different views on what should happen at different places in a story. Kind regards J. Bailey |
2008-05-27 15:26:57 | I'm sorry I can't oblige, since in this story I only wrote an outline of what actually happened one morning quite a few years ago. Kind regards J. Bailey |
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2008-05-28 02:24:03 | Peter I liked your story and the twist in the ending couldn't have been more sneaky. You simply get a positive vote from me. Kind regards J. Bailey |
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2008-05-28 16:35:28 | Thank you for the comment. It is greatfully accepted. I never intended this story to be anybody's "sweetheart". It is a study in horror and nothing else. It has annoyed me for a long time that in the original story Peaches is left standing naked in the woods and this story is a speculation on what might have happened to her. Once I get a few more comments that actually make sense, like this one, I will see about a rewrite. Kind regards J. Bailey |