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| 2009-01-07 16:52:36 | The House - Part 3 | You are so very welcome. And I wish you all, all the best for the new year. Kind regards J. Bailey |
| 2009-01-22 01:57:42 | Thank you for your comment. You are right and you are wrong. I have given this some thought, after reading your comment, and the difference in writing, you are mentioning, would in the real world depend on a persons character and origin. In a story, things like this depend on the writers style and how he imagins his character. Since I'm still defining my style, things like this will continue to pop up. I would suspect though that you might see both types in my stories depending on the character of the story and the persons in it. Kind regards J. Baily |
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| 2009-02-26 18:25:29 | My little latina - ch. 2 | Thank you for your comments... Although I know four languages, Spanish is not one of them. The only Spanish I know is "No habla Espanol". Despite this handicap of mine I do agree with you that it would make the story more realistic. But then again this webpage does not display the special Spanish characters correctly. I once tried to write the Spanish word "Senor" including the tilde n and all that was displayed on the web was "Sen". The site cut off the tilde character and the rest of the word after the tilde character. I have started a rewrite on the first two chapters and I have started work on chapters three and four so I will take your other comments into consideration. Kind regards J. Bailey |
| 2009-02-26 18:26:31 | My little latina - ch. 2 | Thank you for your comments... Although I know four languages, Spanish is not one of them. The only Spanish I know is "No habla Espanol". Despite this handicap of mine I do agree with you that it would make the story more realistic. But then again this webpage does not display the special Spanish characters correctly. I once tried to write the Spanish word "Senor" including the tilde n and all that was displayed on the web was "Sen". The site cut off the tilde character and the rest of the word after the tilde character. I have started a rewrite on the first two chapters and I have started work on chapters three and four so I will take your other comments into consideration. Kind regards J. Bailey |
| 2009-02-27 16:18:54 | The Barfly - ch. 1, rewrite | Why thank you, for your enlightening comments. Don't forget that me being a novice writer has got to affect the quality of my work. If I thought I was perfect I wouldn't give two bits of what you all think of my writing and probably turn off the comments option. Kind regards J. Bailey |