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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-05 17:44:02 | Beth n danny | "Sorry, too many votes today" Good scenario By the last comment, Beth "warmed up" to fucking with her Bro Danny. I would enjoy a sequel to this situation as to how long did they continue, did they meet Mr & Miss Right to go to separate relationships, & did they swap partners from time to time "for old times sake"?? |
| 2019-07-05 18:24:11 | Climbing my instructors mountain | "Sorry, too many votes today" Several misspelled words, tense, & other grammar errors. Nice scenario, good premise, & funny. Gave Phil mixed signals & confusion. A little confusing to me. Sorry |
| 2019-07-10 13:18:15 | Ready | Unique setting & personalities to start a series. Looking forward to the development of "Family Relationships". Will "Pauley" continue to service the needs of all 3 women thru their potential pregnancies? Did all 3 conceive on this wonderfully active day of unprotected sex? (Assuming Grace got her portion of his cream, along with a more complete & deeper orgasm with his eruption.) THANKS for sharing Ur imagination, creativity, & talent on this site. Good job.!! |
| 2019-07-10 16:40:09 | Controlling Sister 3: Controlling Daughter | So, the Dad/Grandpa/bro/Unc died while Steph was in his mind experiencing all the range of memories,current experiences of fucked lovers, offspring, & mind control "double minds" while her Dad/Unk bled to death in the prison shower. Talk about gross, cruel, uncaring self-indulgence of a daughter. Well written. Experienced in these stories, to me, it's obvious the lack of some details shows this was written by a man, not a woman. Women, being more sensitive, are better authors, in my opinion. There are a few exceptions both ways but as a general, I better enjoy "written by women" more. To me, this was still well written, with a completely unexpected ending. A growing Alfred Hitchcock author here. Most of these readers probably don't remember his T-V show or movies. If he had written porn, this would be one. Another "shock ending" si-fi writer of that era, Rod Sterling of the "Twilight Zone" (no vampires). The Mind Control thing would fit right in with his themes. |
| 2019-07-14 13:27:35 | My Neighbor Emily | One comment was about bourbons, (I know nothing about) but spelling, grammar, plot, scenario, etc; technically speaking, I saw nothing wrong whatsoever. It seemed when she came thru the door out of the rain, she had no bra, but it needed to be removed to access her breast & nipples. I also missed the transition from the living room (kitchen) to the bedroom. It seems anticlimactic that she didn't assure James reward as promised before falling asleep. With the stress of the day, bourbon, hot tea, & emotional release of such a overwhelming orgasm, it's no wonder that her fatigue followed soothing release that she could quickly fall asleep before making good her promise. So far she only has the guilt of excessive foreplay. So upon awaking (depending on her moral self-judgment, & anger toward husband){1] eagerly fulfill her promise of reward, {2}Withdraw "gracefully, or [3] run away in a fit of self or projected rage. Eager to see Ch 2.!! Good work |