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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-15 20:49:53 | IT WAS FRAUD--Part 4 of 6 | Still good as the story goes on. A little boring with Weber, just as the mood of the story, good writing. One place i saw "It", & that should have been "Is" because it was like a question. Excited to move on to the next chapter. |
| 2019-07-16 00:56:01 | IT WAS FRAUD--Part 5 of 6 | Like I said, Sean's sign says" Pick a fight with me!" The introduction of the Omni CEO's was classic. Great mood & writing. Looking forward to "Wrapping it all up" in the 6th addition. Beautiful love story! |
| 2019-07-16 03:47:04 | THE WAGES OF SIN--Part 1 | Dummie Anonymous, He said he had suspected nothing & didn't install cameras or hire a detective to check up on her. He hadn't even asked the neighbors until after the fact. He just came home to change clothes & heard the activity in the bedroom. Upon investigation, he went to get his camera & even the pictures didn't show faces until he got Robert's attention. This is as good as "Fraud" U know how to build moods in Ur presentation as well as the words that show the mood of the story. |
| 2019-07-16 04:45:19 | THE WAGES OF SIN--Part 2 | My only comment is to agree with everyone else. I love it. |
| 2019-07-16 12:54:05 | THE WAGES OF SIN--Part 3 | Shows that supermarkets & church are the best places to find a good woman, not in a bar or nightclub. One usually gets what is "shopped for"; Quality is found in better locations. Few wives would have done what Amy did; she fully understood the position of abandonment & granted Terri the compassion that she had received in her time of need. Like I said "Quality"! Like Forrest Gump's Mom said, "Stupid is as stupid does." . Senorlongo, I find nothing questionable in Ur stories . If all of them are like "Fraud" & "Wages of Sin", Ur combination of erotica & ethical behavior in story form is unique & admirable. Thank U for the "breath of fresh air" in this mixed up society. Game Shows now include sexual innuendos in their formats; more so than "Newly Weds" way back when & it was understandable ("whoppie") ! Thank U for introducing family & marriage into the realm of sexual behavior. Everything on Earth is sexual but humans have choice; use it. |