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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-23 13:06:22 | Mom Caught Me pt. 1 | Unusual response from a mom, but very sexy. Also not the expected response from a sister. Didn't see spelling or grammar errors, simple plot so far, character development very limited. Look forward to rest of series. Expect it to be quite interesting. Good job for a start. Rapid flow of events, good detailed description of action. Surprise of Mom's & Sister's reaction to Jeff delightful. Congratulations for a job well done. |
| 2019-07-23 14:01:03 | Mom Caught Me pt. 3 | I didn't see all the spelling errors; they're are programs that alert writers to the errors & suggest correct spellings (with a Rt Clk on mouse). Still good fast flow of story & action with good descriptive details. Character development slowly emerging. Where's Dad? Looking forward to more of the same, hoping Jess & Mom don't get jealous of "who gets the most. |
| 2019-07-23 16:40:07 | Mom Caught Me pt. 5_(1) | Excellent work. Agree with other comments to see Pt 6 When Miss Hunter cums to dinner.I guess u stopped with Ch 5. Sorry about that. Intend to look at more of Ur works, Thanks for the entertainment. Another chapter ;might be Jeff catching up with Jess watching porn with her. Even bring Sharon & :Miss Hunter with them!! |
| 2019-07-23 18:42:05 | My Sister's Lotion pt. 2 | Yeah, sure, Jessica & Connie will get the full affect watching on video what Jenn experienced first hand. They wanted proof. Jenn did the best she could to provide proof making personal sacrifices just for her friends. When word gets around, Jenn may need more bottles & maybe a couple of boyfriends to help keep up with needs for more production. Looking forward to Ch 3 |
| 2019-07-23 23:26:12 | The Lost Tribe | When is Chapter 2 available. Lots of story still possible. Love it. Reminiscent of "The Blue Lagoon" |