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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-25 14:14:15 | We Just Clicked | Probably, I make too many lengthy comments on every story, frequently sharing some experience displaying my prowess or insecurity one. Never have I had the opportunity for a 3some or 4some. I would like to swap partners (in the same room) but none of my partners had any desire of which I was aware. We have had several close friends & the subject of sex occasionally surfaced but never in such a vein that would lead to any action except in private with spouse. Usually then just a slight reference or inundo. Again, Ur plots & scenarios are so believable. Looking back , I don't believe I would have been a very good swap partner. I would have been more clumsy trying to pleasure the friend than my own wife. At 77, with ED & a non-willing partner, the idea of fulling that fantasy will never happen. So I enjoy reading about other people enjoying their sexual pleasure. |
| 2019-07-25 18:13:13 | G-Spot . . . or Not | "Sorry, too many votes today" The story of half my life. Tina, you're a wonderful author. Your stories are delightful, interesting, erotic, believable & realistic, well written in plot, technical skills & flow. The only criticism I've already voiced about certain short stories being cut too short, needed additional parts or chapters to make them more complete. Glad I was able to "catch" this posting 15 minutes late instead of years later. |
| 2019-07-26 02:42:47 | How Traditions Start – part 2 | 2nd time to read, still good. Descriptions of detailed "teaching" awesome in pt #1 & #2. I can't think of anything to give U constructive criticism that hasn't been said. Thank you for sharing your talent on this site. |
| 2019-07-26 11:49:38 | How Traditions Start – part 3 | 2nd reading just as enjoyable as the 1st. So glad I expect to be able to finish the series. Seems each chapter is better than the last; thinking it can't get any better than this, but it does. Great writing Starrynight. If you're not a girl, please forgive me, but in my experience, usually women write with such clarity, finesse, & descriptive details. Thanks for sharing your talent on this site. AWESOME!! |
| 2019-07-26 15:35:13 | How Traditions Start – part 4 | 2nd reading is great. Starry, U should better "proof" Ur work before submitting it. One typo was "give " instead of "gaze upon her body". I also noticed 1 or 2 others, they distracted from the overall professionalism of the work. Great theme has carried out flawlessly in character building, inner feelings, building of emotions, & detailed account of the seductive teaching . The little things sometimes do count toward the overall mood of the story. Again THANKS & only 3 points less than AWESOME!! Maybe, I'm just petty but I expect you want to know of anything we see that might improve your skill |