| 2020-05-11 13:03:33 |
Curious Siblings (Part 1)
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Great job;good flow, good grammar, spelling & paragraphs. Realistic scenario, good dialogue, a good potrail of alearning experience that needs more knowledgeable guidance; but where to go for answers. Really looking forward to the series. THANKS for sharing your talent. Keep writting! |
| 2020-05-11 13:08:31 |
Curious Siblings (Part 1)
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Listen to sarrynight, she is one of th best. If you've not read herHow Traditions start," do yourself a favor! |
| 2020-05-11 16:09:50 |
Ed & Sue
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Beatiful love story! Do they get married or have any kids, what happens next? I'd be willing to bet they don't use 2 appartments after the remodling ! |
| 2020-05-12 15:33:46 |
The Toe Job Challenge-Jim Earns Respect - Chapter 1
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Disappointed that Barb, Anne, & other Night friends weren't included in this chapter. Except for this part, Barbara is mentioned in every other part, but most about Barbara is the 1st part only, preceded by Anne in "Snowbound".There is no closure with Barbara, Do they just "a "move on"? Become fuck Buddies? Have a modern domestic relationship? Or full blown marriage? Does Jim continue to service other friends & Barb in between? Do they become exclusive or just snare everything as he goes to Susan's or Todd & Anne's to make a foursome? Because this was posted 2 months ago, there is still time to bring the "Barbara & Jim thing" to better closure. Just wish I had your talent to tell about some of my liaisons.I really enjoye the series, just want more about the lead characters, Jim & Barbaba. THANKS agai nfor sharing. |
| 2020-05-13 22:51:17 |
Naked Day - part 10 California Dreaming
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WOW ! This is a very creative way to take a theme(family relations) to another level on the "other "side of the family. What if Pet Sis are into erotica, or something? That will be a bonus! Thank you again for sharing your remarkable talent & creativity. Still looking forward as how you bring this out in Calif. |