| 2020-06-18 11:29:17 |
Sisters at the Shore
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Great scenario. Hot action details. The grammar & punctuation errors didn't detract my enjoyment of the story. THANKS AGAIN FOR sharing Ur creative talent with us. |
| 2020-06-18 11:41:03 |
An employment change
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My first comments didn't post. Excellent introduction to. A great series. Glad Barry gave her choice just like on a regular date. Look forward to more on her new job. THANKS. for sharing ! |
| 2020-06-19 15:39:34 |
How I met my first wife
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Excellent scenario, up to Ur usual standards. I find it strange Joan would be willing to share U with her kin, Deb. Already at Ur young age, an open relationship. Really enjoy Ur entries I've read so far. Part 2 must have a different name, I'll look again! I'd like to know more about the courtship, & how & why U chose Deb, not Joan? Of course it's none of my business, but U opened the can , I want to see & hear about ALL the worms, especially those that get squirmy or hidden or eaten. |
| 2020-06-20 00:23:50 |
We meet again chapter 1
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Reminds me a little about my 9 yr affair before I married my prestnt wife. Every since I told her (courting) "Until we know where this is going, I'll date no one else!" It's still going (25 ys &I've had only her since I said that! When one has the best, why mess with the rest? Like every thing about Ur posts. |
| 2020-06-21 23:43:36 |
Siblings Desire 2
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So glad U wrote pt #2. Look forward for more parts to cum. Ur top drawer in my list. THANKS FOR Ur remarkable posts. I've enjoyed technical ("grammrg |