| 2020-09-25 12:13:46 |
Kaitlyn's Good Deal. Changes? (Pt.3)
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Wow, all 3 holes used to turn on mutual plearure. She enjoyed being "owned" by a veral man that knew how to caringly thrill her body to their mutual plearure pleasure. All around excellent post. Expected the relationrhip to evolve to be closer & longer lasting. Again, THANKS for sharing your talent on this site for our entertainment & pleasure! |
| 2020-09-25 13:32:35 |
New Neighbors-pt.1
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Excellent introduction to a pontentially awesome series. One big step forward is good tech (spelling, grammar, paragraphs & dialogue), great scenario, good details of action. A couple of pagraphs a littld long, but not distracting from the smooth flow of the story line. Will be checking " updates" daily for more "Mew Neighbors"! More after ch 2 & 3. THANKS for sharing your talent on this site. |
| 2020-09-25 13:49:00 |
New Neighbors-pt.1
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Agree that Donna should be 36, not 30, for Dawn to be 18. Minor slip of dates. |
| 2020-09-28 04:59:22 |
Running Down a Dream - 4
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You could make this an epic similar to "Naked Day." As active as Cami is, she should get married within 2 yrs. If Ry & Kel can make it the 1st yr mostly apart, they're good!" Kel & Cam will want to reunion at the cabin with their new husbands; rembering THAT summer of the arousing threesomes. Cam gets Kel to 69 & Cam wants Ry, too. Finally they all decide to share in a foursome. |
| 2020-09-28 06:19:23 |
Running Down a Dream - 5
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Excellent closurer. You were fast posting "Naked Day"; I'm sure it wasn't easy. Another epic similar would be harder. Seems that. #5 leaves an open door for more, mentioning a returm to the cabin. THANKS again for sharing your AWESOME talent on this site |