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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-29 13:58:07 | MY FIRST LESBIAN EXPERIENCE. | To me, women authors are better & give better details of action.. Enjoyed stories of yours I've read! THANKS for sharing! |
| 2020-12-30 00:49:09 | First time hubby let his friends use me | Excellent scenario. Paragraphs a little longer than should be. Some dialogue 3 people speaking in the same paragraph. Sometimes it's difficult to easily follow the conversation. A few places, you seemed to get so excited ( understandable) you left words out of sentences. Difficult to proof your own material. This ment for you or someone to better proofread your stories. You still got positive vote but all the little things I mentioned might sway a critical reader to vote Negative. |
| 2021-03-10 19:42:23 | A Son Lusts for His Mother Ch. 10 - 12 (Final) | To not be a writer you do a good job. Scenario, grammar & spelling, & flow are great. Paragraphs.dialogue. & details of action could use improvement. THANKS! Enjoyed, especially the conclusion! |
| 2021-03-11 02:55:55 | Florida Fantasy | Didn't realize I'd voted earlier. Now, too kate for a sequel when the couples reunite in Cleveland. Sounds like they could get more intimate! THANKS |
| 2021-02-12 06:15:37 | OFFICE FUN 3: The Managers | My 2nd or 3rd reading. One reason I enjoy your series is thf female hotly enjoys the action. Hardly ever do I vote 'negative'; but voting 'positive' I want to encourage & hopefully constructive criticism. Dialogue is easy to understand, still some paragraphs are too long. THANKS for posting on this site. |