| 2010-07-24 01:18:06 |
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I submitted a short version of it about two years ago, when the stories section wasn't working. The title, then, was "I THINK SHE LIKES IT".
It was too short to be accepted as a story so I made some changes to make it longer.
The rating doesn't look that great but eight and a half out of ten have liked it. (at least for now) |
| 2010-07-24 01:19:46 |
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It was originally submitted in the Forum Section. |
| 2010-07-24 01:20:31 |
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I submitted a short version of it about two years ago, when the stories section wasn't working. The title, then, was "I THINK SHE LIKES IT".
It was too short to be accepted as a story so I made some changes to make it longer.
The rating doesn't look that great but eight and a half out of ten have liked it. (at least for now) |
| 2010-11-19 04:06:24 |
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Since this site was screwed up, everyone had a zero rating. I wish they'd see and correct stuff like that. it put a whole bunch of stories at the bottom, whether they were good or bad. I signed in and gave myself the first positive vote to at least get the story up the list where it can be seen and on board. Hope you guys like it. SSB |
| 2010-12-16 04:00:43 |
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Yeah, I think you're right about the language I had them using but the nervousness wasn't as much a big deal because they were used to doing whatever they wanted to do with each other and didn't know what they were getting into until his cock actually went into her. By then, they knew and it was done. ... but from the reader's point of view I see what you're saying. SSB |