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Comments from Lunalupo
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-08-23 20:39:06 | The Debt Collector - Part 1 re-posted | Great start on this story. But you need to use some paragraph breaks, one extremely looooooong paragraph makes for hard reading. I did give you a positive score though as the story is otherwise well written. Thanks for sharing your erotic talent. |
| 2010-08-23 22:10:22 | The Debt Collector - Part3 | I do not know why this story has not been rated higher. If a reader read the first chapter then continued on they must like it. Giving a low rating on the third chapter just does not make sense. I gave it a well deserved positive rating. Well done!! Lunalupo |
| 2010-09-08 23:53:05 | Double Trouble? | Truly love this story. It is so made for going on more, and more, and more. Thank you so much for sharing your awesome talent. Of course I gave you a well deserved positive rating. Lunalupo |
| 2010-09-12 18:19:02 | My Slutty Wife Used as a Dog Slave Bitch part 1 | Something is screwy with XNXX - I made a constructive comment and it came back as saying that it contained bad words. |
| 2010-09-24 23:37:00 | The tree fort | Great start. I am glad you have more chapters, this will be an awesome story. Thank you for sharing your erotic talent, I gave you a well deserved positive rating. Lunalupo |