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Comments from Lunalupo
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-08-09 21:56:29 | Forget Harper Valley PTA | Awesome story. Would love for it to continue here, with his daughters cumming the next time. Then of course he should start sharing their delights at home not only with himself but with some friends as well. You really know how to make the reader feel like he/she is a part of the action. Thank you for sharing your erotic talent. Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-10 21:56:26 | The House At The End of the Street | The story was good as far as it went; however, it appears that the only thing you are interested here is to get people to go to your publisher's web site and buy your book(s). You leave people dangling wanting more. I did give the story a positive rating as it was well done, for as far as it went. Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-14 21:14:24 | The Homeless Peeper | Great read. I would love for you to continue this awesome story. You certainly have made it possible to see into the sexual activity. Thank you for sharing your talent. Of course I gave you a positive rating, well deserved. Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-14 21:28:41 | Janice_(1) | I did give the story a positive rating as it was well written. However, it is not my type of story as I like for the sexual activity to be real and personal with vivid descriptions of the sexual acts. This story could be remade into a really hot story with multiple chapters. |
| 2010-08-15 22:36:22 | What Daddy Needs | Really well written. You have the ability to bring the reader into the story. I really felt for both characters (we do not know about the brother yet) but I also enjoyed the hot sex. Now on to part 2. Thank you so much for sharing your amazingly erotic talent. Lunalupo |