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Comments from Piquet
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-07-12 04:12:59 | Dream Lover_(0) | Nice one Otzchiim. "Pubic hair" is a bit clinical for me. But a nice turns of phrase - particularly at the conclusion. - Piquet |
| 2009-07-14 18:45:54 | Can't Rape the Willing | Very powerful work Safe Bet. An ode for the downtrodden. - Piquet |
| 2009-07-22 07:12:43 | Peering From the Darkness | Great work Safe Bet. Very evocative and erotically charged. Watch your tenses. You are writing in the present tense so try " Can she hear the beating of my heart." Also, what is it that falls onto the floor? Her hips? In all a fine poem. Well Done. - Piquet |
| 2009-07-23 21:33:04 | My Anus | Oh Crustybunger, you never fail to crack me up !!! btw "does" and "doth" mean the same thing and I don't think there ever was such a word as "thoust". But, "Which doth proclaim the dusk" is fine. Well done, you always give us gastronomical distress - but in a nice way. Cheers from Piquet |
| 2009-08-30 08:11:32 | Butterscotch Part 5 (new edit) | Thanks for your comment. There are four earlier chapters to Butterscotch, please read them. Yes, I'm working on the sixth and final part now. - Piquet. |