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Comments from ejls
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-10-23 15:27:29 | Boys Locker Room to My Room | Good story, but instead of writing "He says, I reply, I tell him", please use quotes, and write it as a conversation. It will make for an easier read. |
| 2008-10-23 15:30:31 | Shower Surprize | Excellent! |
| 2008-10-23 15:37:48 | Me and my sister.PT 1 | Looking forward to Part 2. Slow it down a little and make more of an effort with your descriptions. |
| 2008-10-23 15:42:55 | Chocolate Fun! part 2 | Are you having anyone read these before you submit? A second opinion might save you from the slamming you are getting in comments. Better than the first, but still a disappointment. |
| 2008-10-23 15:45:32 | There had better be a part 2! Too hot to let it stop there! |