| 2008-10-28 19:06:49 |
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I wish I was Millie. |
| 2008-11-03 21:18:59 |
Grown up stepdaughter
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Sooooo hot. |
| 2009-05-10 10:14:32 |
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A wonderful read. Great technique. I like that a sex story can be well-written instead of just going for the cum scene. I am looking at your other submissions and will be doing a lot of reading. |
| 2009-05-24 17:47:01 |
THE WAITRESS' HOT, WET TIP
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A well-written erotic story. I loved the characters, and the joy they both took in the sex. Keep them coming. I want more from you. |
| 2009-05-25 12:51:03 |
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Well written, easy to read. What I liked best was that I felt you were sitting here talking to me. So descriptive, yet leaving enough to the readers imagination. I am looking forward to reading your other works. |