| 2018-06-15 19:46:20 |
Missy Brother and Dad (3)
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you have a great idea for this story but unfortunately it is way too short for me that is just my preference. Funny how in this house everyone is sneaking into the little girls room but mommy has no idea |
| 2018-07-16 06:19:09 |
Did he just?
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not bad at all liked the story |
| 2018-07-22 04:47:23 |
THE WAYWARD DAUGHTER
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horrible flow nothing is thought out. It is so choppy you really can't read it. It seems you had a nice outline but didn't fill in all that well. |
| 2018-07-22 04:47:27 |
THE WAYWARD DAUGHTER
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horrible flow nothing is thought out. It is so choppy you really can't read it. It seems you had a nice outline but didn't fill in all that well. |
| 2019-01-08 03:44:25 |
An Evening With My StepDaughter
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skibum69 you did a good job |