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Comments from Karen~
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| 2009-02-12 21:04:01 | Accident | Needs quotations, spaces, the whole "........." idea is....kinda.....annoying... More detail would be nice. Work on it. 5/10 |
| 2009-02-15 18:47:24 | ._. Sorry I didnt mean to post this version... I had it posted at midnight... I am trying to get it deleted.... x_x Sorry again. T_T K |
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| 2009-02-13 14:41:48 | I know half the time I see the wall of text I'm like: Not reading this. But it was great. :) (Better than mine ;_;, -sob, cry, cry-) Keep writing, I look forward to reading it. :) 10/10 :D! |
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| 2009-02-13 14:51:42 | Well done, once again. :) | |
| 2009-02-13 15:26:27 | BABY GIRL_(1) | Sad ending :( Poor girl. The other comments have said everything already :p 10/10 |