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Comments from Karen~
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-05-04 17:52:15 | Twister sex with a hot girl | Good descriptions. It seems somewhat realistic, though if I were here I wouldn't have let myself be alone with you :3 But that's just me. Also it is rather short, so making it longer would be better too. Good job though. Dear READER 2009-05-03 20:43:45, Are you the same person who gives the dumb comments to everyone? If so, get lost. Nobody wants you here. If not, read the story before commenting. |
| 2009-08-24 16:56:11 | -10th Grade- The Rock Climb (2) | I prefer to think of Abby more as a wolf so it's not so surprising she could kill him. It's not like she was a poodle, seriously. If he died to a poodle, I'd just laugh. |
| 2009-11-04 22:29:16 | A Slavegirl of Rome | I agree with the previous comment. I just think you need a bit more spaces, because the wall of text is hard to look at. Also start a new line when a new person is talking to keep it from being confusing. |
| 2011-04-21 00:41:46 | BABY GIRL_(1) | I already replied once. But jesus mother-effing christ, YOU WRITE AMAZINGLY. I'm going to go check for a part 2, and if there isn't I will personally spam your PM box until you make one. |
| 2011-04-21 00:45:22 | Oh God... yes...! | ...Write more please. |