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Date Story title Comment
2009-02-18 20:59:50 Little Red Riding Slut Lol xD what a great personality Little Red Riding Hood has~

Anyway, good story. Funny xD. Extremely different, but things like that are good on a website where all the stories are somewhat similar.
2009-03-04 23:21:56 Thanks.

I'll just consider this a trend, but for those of you who feel like posting comments like - "Stupid. -.-", then please include WHY you said that so it can be considered constructive, and not just a complete waste of time.

K
2009-03-05 08:52:07 For the record, when she said sex was all good and fine it may have implied that she had sex before but that was not intended, sorry for this misconception. I simply meant for it to show she wasn't afraid of sex.

I took about 1hr to write this, just wanted to see how it would turn out. And by the looks of it, it's gone well.

Please provide an example of my fractured paragraph please. ;), because technically all paragraphs can end the moment the subject/topic of the paragraph/sentance has changed. There were few grammatical errors.

But anyhow, thanks for your somewhat constructive comments, though I have to say (@e) that you provided no examples of what I could do to improve, and no serious ideas.

Thanks for everyone else though.
K

P.S. lastmochenan,
Dick size? Seriously, they were in a pitch black closet.
As if she could see that. He had descriptions from when she could see him, no later. :(
2009-03-05 08:55:49 -10th Grade- The Rock Climb (2) Lol...
That's a good question. o_o;
But still, whatever I say doesnt matter if I didn't include it intext, so be creative and think up your own reason.

Ex.: Maybe the dog considered her boyfriend a threat to her?

K
2009-03-05 09:04:30 -10th Grade- The Rock Climb (2) Yeah. I know she didnt wake up. I did that on purpose, lol. ;D
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