| 2010-07-31 08:52:59 |
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A lot of sex, but then it was about the porn industry. Tragic ending. |
| 2010-07-31 08:54:42 |
John’s Last Summer
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This was a great story that was so true to life. Very fine writing. |
| 2010-07-31 08:55:42 |
Second Honeymoon_(0)
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Adult humor at it's finest. A truly loving tale of Murphy's Law. |
| 2010-07-31 08:57:30 |
I guess I really DID need a vacation!
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You turned a tragic episode into an tender, erotic story. I really loved this and hope you continue with these characters. |
| 2010-07-31 08:59:57 |
Sophie's Summer Holiday
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I don't think there is one emotion you didn't strike in me. Excellent job - and a short story that could easily translate to a novel. |