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Comments from Redlust
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-07-14 18:37:46 | I Cummed On Mommy's Face | pretty good story but your characters repeating 9/10ths of what they say is a bit annoying |
| 2010-07-24 19:37:05 | John’s Last Summer | to joemagnum611: I agree I wasn't going for realism as much on this one... as John's character was loosely based on me, and part of it was wish fulfillment I wanted him to be a "if I knew then what I know now' kinda thing and have him say the right thing as opposed to what I did in that situation which was humiliating and certainly didn't lead to sexual relations. I do hear ya though and I appreciate the feedback for more 'realism' in speech try my Sophie or Kellie series. |
| 2010-08-10 19:47:03 | you referenced the dildo as "her favorite vibrating dildo..." then in the same paragraph you say it was a gag gift she never had the courage to try till then. So its her favorite but never used? | |
| 2010-09-29 20:13:32 | Choose your own adventure!!! Episode 5 | Interesting series Metropolis if you haven't tallied the votes as of yet I'd go with B. its hopefully some pretty chick ready to join in Kelly's punishment. its unlikely that the tease only annoyed guys. |
| 2010-10-25 21:53:47 | Show Daddy | like has been said by the rest there is potential there. but if your character is a mid teen there is alot less naivete than the dialogue supposed... or conversely if you like that dialogue you have to drop the age (I'd put it as sounding around 7-9 area) |