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Comments from hornyelk
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-03-09 19:50:31 | Memoirs | I liked your story, interesting take on the CAW5 and it does provoke imagery and emotion. |
| 2011-03-09 20:57:34 | An affair to remember_(0) | I liked it, you have imagination and talent. Keep writing, I hope to read more. |
| 2011-03-10 19:05:57 | Disaster at Antonio's | I liked the changing viewpoints, which at first were a bit unclear. The breaks with ID could help, maintain the rotation through the characters. This is a good story to work with, continue? Add gratuitus sex to get more votes? |
| 2011-03-10 21:35:13 | Could That Have Been Her? | Very well done. Good story, nice tie-in to the scene from the pic. I liked the characters, the pace, and the action (trust me it works). CAW5 contender! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This was my comment, login timed out. |
| 2011-03-11 17:50:48 | The Party's Over | A lot of potential, get past the obvious mistakes and there is a good imagination working here. Sometimes I need a little help moving between scenes and characters? |