| 2014-05-18 03:50:13 |
Peeping Tom 2
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I really liked this story (both parts). There are a few misused (misspelled) words that affect the flow, so if you are using a spell checker, break out the dictionary. (examples: brake instead of break, ceased instead of seized). |
| 2014-05-18 04:33:41 |
My new girlfriend wants me to get her a slave 1
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I like your story, it reads well and the subject matter excites me. |
| 2014-05-18 06:08:28 |
My new girlfriend wants me to get her a slave 2
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Looking forward to more. |
| 2014-12-27 14:10:55 |
A MOTHER'S LOVE
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Loved this story. Added to my favorites |
| 2015-01-31 00:46:06 |
I Caught Mom Or Did She Catch Me 4
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I like your stories, I do agree that some proofing is needed to remove some grammar and spelling errors to help the flow. Also, the character's behavior Eric II and Lyd is inconsistent. Confusing when trying to understand what is happening. |