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Comments from hotjohn4321
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-07-02 19:24:34 | good story, liked the idea | |
| 2011-07-04 13:24:26 | Rachael’s Story – Chapter 1 – Time stands still | good story and nicely written, interesting POV |
| 2011-07-23 21:29:37 | Pickup Mystery | for the anonymous coward chief is the defined as leader, chef is a head cook. I use word and a spell check is not alway perfect, I also use the thesaurus. I bet you like making your self important by putting other down. By the way idiot the email is available at my profile, but as you do not have the courage to post your name I doubt you have the courage to write me. |
| 2011-09-20 17:09:39 | My cousin Mark | Well this is a great start to a very long story. Love the connection. Can use some work but still off to good start. Love your web sit too. |
| 2012-07-11 10:36:48 | school bus ride | It is a start but a little hard to follow. Try using " marks for actual comment and ' for thoughts. When posting try to increase type size. Easier for us old dudes to read. |