| 2010-12-19 21:25:45 |
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Crawled out from under your rock for another try nhawk700,hmm?
I am still waiting for you to either substantiate your assertion or write something that shows me how to write a really good story.
I'm waiting Oh nhawk700, any time you like sunshine? Nows good... |
| 2010-12-25 03:06:20 |
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One of the things we writers want to do is create a visual picture for the reader. We don't always succeed because its not as easy as it may sound but Alex has managed brilliantly. Not a pleasant subject but exceptionally well written, in my opinion. |
| 2011-03-02 05:01:24 |
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Well I guess its just you and me that like it. |
| 2011-04-01 02:27:02 |
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I love this story, I know, I wrote it but of all my stories this is the one I come back to the most.
It isn't a sex story its an erotic love story and I think the better for it.
Oh and I love the ending too . |
| 2011-04-01 02:30:39 |
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I don't see a Part 2 here because the last scene completes the story. She starts out insecure and frightened and ends confident and assured.
The story is about her and I can't see any further I could go with it. Yes, opportunities for more sex scenes but that's about all.
But thanks for your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed it. |