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Comments from Sage Of The Forlorn Path
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-02-20 18:57:59 | Fucking my sister during the holidays (reposted) | I would like to apologize to anyone who sees this story. I reposted my work because I was just arrogant and desperate for feedback, and I didn't even bother to make it better. I'm sorry, and I hope this won't give you a negative view of the rest of my work. Again, I apologize for my careless immaturity. |
| 2011-04-19 12:55:42 | The slut my daughter rooms with | Pretty good, but it was way too short. You needed more time between when Cindy is introduced and when he just decides to rape her. There have been a few girls that pissed me off, but I don't just drag them into the nearest room and violate them. You also needed to spend more time with the sex itself. You basically just jumped past fucking her pussy and only took a quick look into anal. it was pretty good, but it needs work. I also love what Anonymous reader said about modern day society. |
| 2011-06-10 17:20:10 | My loving daughter and my wife. | Along with a sense of grammar... |
| 2011-07-12 14:40:55 | It could use a lot of work. There wasn't nearly enough build-up, the girl who was supposedly 14 talked like she was 9 years old, and never EVER give the main character an 8 inch dick. Saying it's big is fine, but actually saying it's 8 inches is an amateur and stupid move. It was ok, but like I said, it needed work. | |
| 2011-07-14 12:18:35 | Sailing with my daughter and friend pt2 | I love this story, really well done. |