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Comments from Don'sdick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-12-15 05:25:58 | What Jehovah Witnessed Part Three | Positive but constructive... you need to write the whole thing in one person format only. Some of this is in third person, some on first person. BUT... the first person changes from Dawn, to the guys, to 3rd person again. Good storyline because I like rape stories, but choose one specific format. |
| 2017-12-15 05:34:55 | What Jehovah Witnessed Part Four | Good finish |
| 2017-12-15 17:31:49 | First time_(1) | Great! Try laying your story aside for a couple days. Then do a slow proofread before posting. That really helps eliminate small mistakes. Write more, please. |
| 2017-12-21 03:19:35 | Meeting Emma at the Hotel Part 2 | My cock was hard the whole time I read this part.. On to part three and, hopefully, I'll jack a load. |
| 2018-01-03 05:04:09 | RavagedMe | Okay, don't delay.. we need the rest of the story.. |