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Comments from Don'sdick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-05-02 04:14:50 | I love playing with daddy | Great start.. waiting for part 2 |
| 2018-05-23 04:37:09 | I love you playing with daddy pt 2 | Good, Cockaddict.. more, please |
| 2018-05-23 04:40:04 | I love you playing with daddy 3 | Part 3 & the diary are the same section of the story.. Really good, though. I just can't wait for you to get your first real good fucking.. Write it as soon as possible. |
| 2018-05-28 03:42:14 | “Daddy, can Paige stay over tonight?” | Good story, and one that can easily hold extra chapters. Hint: an easy way to spot those spelling errors is to read the story aloud and do it a day after it's written. It is really a hot one, though. Keep writing.. |
| 2018-05-28 03:52:41 | Busted_(2) | Okay... good, hot story, but... as the others have mentioned, 17 or 14?? You only being 4ft 10in makes it a little strange that a girl six inches taller would be interested... but... lotsa strange girls out there. Once again, read aloud & correct any errors. |