| 2010-08-14 08:03:12 |
Jessica, My Next-Door Neighbor
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Very well done. I like the innocence, and the pace of the story. You should definitely write a follow up. You have knack for keeping your readers erect!! |
| 2010-09-20 07:59:14 |
A bumpy ride to camp Crystal Lake
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Not bad. Hopefully there will be a followup story. |
| 2011-01-03 12:51:04 |
My Kindly Neighbour
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This story definitely needs another chapter. Well done mate!! |
| 2011-01-03 12:51:18 |
My Kindly Neighbour
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This story definitely needs another chapter. Well done mate!! |
| 2011-01-03 12:56:37 |
My Kindly Neighbour
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Great story. We need another chapter. Well done mate! |