| 2011-01-30 09:23:38 |
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Thanks for the comments. It must be kept in mind that the story is categorized as fiction, so the boy's capabilities are enhanced to add a little "wishful thinking" to the story. |
| 2011-08-13 16:11:36 |
Mom's Insecurities_(1)
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This was very well written. It was not the usual "jerk off" material, but rather, a very sensual story told in a very erotic way. Keep writing! |
| 2011-08-13 16:28:05 |
Jeanie's Big Boy
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Great story. I write stories too, and it's so frustrating that they can't fix the punctuation problem on this site. It detracts from the story. |
| 2011-09-06 14:31:25 |
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That was a really good start. Definitely go on to chapter 2. |
| 2013-04-21 18:53:48 |
Sister and Me_(0)
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This is really bad. Is this a joke or are you having difficulty with the English language? |