| 2011-01-16 07:05:50 |
Me,My Friend and our little girls
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I don't think that the majority of readers care about spelling and punctuation. Let's be real here. These types of stories aren't written to be believable, or to win a pulitzer prizes. They are written so that readers can jerk off and cum fantasizing that the subject of the story is them. I agree that the grammar errors are a little distracting, but they don't ruin the "erection effect". |
| 2011-01-16 07:06:07 |
Me,My Friend and our little girls
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I don't think that the majority of readers care about spelling and punctuation. Let's be real here. These types of stories aren't written to be believable, or to win a pulitzer prizes. They are written so that readers can jerk off and cum fantasizing that the subject of the story is them. I agree that the grammar errors are a little distracting, but they don't ruin the "erection effect". |
| 2011-01-16 07:06:37 |
Me,My Friend and our little girls
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I don't think that the majority of readers care about spelling and punctuation. Let's be real here. These types of stories aren't written to be believable, or to win a pulitzer prizes. They are written so that readers can jerk off and cum fantasizing that the subject of the story is them. I agree that the grammar errors are a little distracting, but they don't ruin the "erection effect". |
| 2011-01-30 09:23:20 |
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Thanks for the comments. It must be kept in mind that the story is categorized as fiction, so the boy's capabilities are enhanced to add a little "wishful thinking" to the story. |
| 2011-01-30 09:23:31 |
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Thanks for the comments. It must be kept in mind that the story is categorized as fiction, so the boy's capabilities are enhanced to add a little "wishful thinking" to the story. |