| 2011-12-13 20:20:10 |
My private times with my wife's hot 18 year old cousin Jamie - Chapter III
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Well this was a lot of build up for a great let down. You could have went more into the detail like in the first part. Keep writing, you had a good idea, just poor execution. |
| 2012-02-27 21:46:02 |
Catching Emily
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Good story. I would love to read more on this. |
| 2012-02-29 21:46:32 |
Sexercise
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Great twist there at the end! |
| 2012-03-21 12:49:32 |
WHEN I WAS YOUNG
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I can not even follow this shit. Please do not write a part 2. Maybe work on this part and make it readable. Also lose the caps that makes it hard to read as well. |
| 2012-04-28 21:25:06 |
lonley mommy
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my mom was an angle sent from god.... ya I stopped reading after this. |